Breathehope // Spite
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- KVRAF
- 12977 posts since 29 Sep, 2003 from Ottawa, Canada
I like the fragility of the voice at times, but at other times I'd like to see that "confidence" that you yourself have admitted is still missing. Your pitch and phrasing (perfect word, diverdee) are fine, but I'd like to hear a part of Danielle with some power and confidence.
The really "fragile" quality reminds me of-- and forgive me for making comparisons!-- Chantal Kreviazuk. But Chantal K is also very capable of powerful delivery. I don't think that one necessarily precludes the other. In other words, I know that many of your admirers here will advise you to focus on the particular style you're displaying in songs like "Spite," but I think you'd be well served to develop all aspects of your singing.
Greg
The really "fragile" quality reminds me of-- and forgive me for making comparisons!-- Chantal Kreviazuk. But Chantal K is also very capable of powerful delivery. I don't think that one necessarily precludes the other. In other words, I know that many of your admirers here will advise you to focus on the particular style you're displaying in songs like "Spite," but I think you'd be well served to develop all aspects of your singing.
Greg
- KVRAF
- 4845 posts since 2 Sep, 2005 from city of lights (nl)
Pretty sweet song! I love the way the percussion unintentionally sounds like a typewriter.
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- KVRAF
- 3617 posts since 26 Sep, 2003 from Bradford - The Armpit of Britain
I know what your saying Lunch Money & I agree.
The occasional more powerful 'swell' in the vocals would add some extra emotional resonance to an already wonderful track.
I'm playing this again as I write this - really very taken with it.
As a one time vocalist I understand how difficult it can be to get over the confidence 'hump' (& I freely admit I was fairly pants - I just stopped caring & enjoyed gigging to much to care anymore).
breathehope you have no reason to lack confidence, seriously.
The occasional more powerful 'swell' in the vocals would add some extra emotional resonance to an already wonderful track.
I'm playing this again as I write this - really very taken with it.
As a one time vocalist I understand how difficult it can be to get over the confidence 'hump' (& I freely admit I was fairly pants - I just stopped caring & enjoyed gigging to much to care anymore).
breathehope you have no reason to lack confidence, seriously.
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- KVRian
- 868 posts since 2 Jan, 2003 from In the foothills of the Rocky Mountains
danielle,
welcome back.....good to hear you are still into music. i thought we lost you there...
I really like the the vibes in this song and your voice is great but I agree with the comments about bringing your vocals to the front of the mix by either eq-ing or changing the dynamics of your voice as you sing and bringing up the levels.
i really like the idea of using field recordings for songs as I often use "found" sounds for my songs, but those sounds are covering the most important part of the song....your voice.
If you want to do another song sometime, let me know. i'd be happy to.
dano
welcome back.....good to hear you are still into music. i thought we lost you there...
I really like the the vibes in this song and your voice is great but I agree with the comments about bringing your vocals to the front of the mix by either eq-ing or changing the dynamics of your voice as you sing and bringing up the levels.
i really like the idea of using field recordings for songs as I often use "found" sounds for my songs, but those sounds are covering the most important part of the song....your voice.
If you want to do another song sometime, let me know. i'd be happy to.
dano
"In a sky full of people, only some want to fly,
Isn’t that crazy?"
Isn’t that crazy?"
- KVRAF
- 10286 posts since 17 Sep, 2004 from Austin, TX
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- KVRist
- 149 posts since 28 Sep, 2005 from New Mexico, USA
Danielle,
Very nice!
Any comment I would have has already been stated, but for posterity's sake:
Again:
Very nice!
Any comment I would have has already been stated, but for posterity's sake:
Lunch Money wrote:but I'd like to hear a part of Danielle with some power and confidence.
danielmm wrote:I agree with the comments about bringing your vocals to the front of the mix
I love the 'lullaby' feel to this, and the vocal fx at around 2:55 is just spot on.diverdee wrote:breathehope you have no reason to lack confidence, seriously.
Again:
Seriously.diverdee wrote:breathehope you have no reason to lack confidence, seriously.
- KVRAF
- 9064 posts since 1 Aug, 2003
very beautiful voice - but pretty reminiscent of Bjork.
nice song.
nice song.
- KVRAF
- 9064 posts since 1 Aug, 2003
+1Lunch Money wrote:I'd like to hear a part of Danielle with some power and confidence.
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- KVRian
- 868 posts since 2 Jan, 2003 from In the foothills of the Rocky Mountains
Wow...that's quite a bump....
Are you still around here Danielle....
dano
Are you still around here Danielle....
dano
"In a sky full of people, only some want to fly,
Isn’t that crazy?"
Isn’t that crazy?"
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 139 posts since 11 Feb, 2005
Vurt is my messenger.
Yes I'm still here. I just don't read as often, I can't keep up with everything.
Thank you bump this song, its one of my favorites, can't wait to do it live.
Thank you bump this song, its one of my favorites, can't wait to do it live.
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 139 posts since 11 Feb, 2005
I need to go to the cafe to see what I have missed!
How is everyone?
How is everyone?
- addled muppet weed
- 111283 posts since 26 Jan, 2003 from through the looking glass
breathehope wrote:Vurt is my messenger.
loosely translated as "vurt is stalking me
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- KVRian
- 868 posts since 2 Jan, 2003 from In the foothills of the Rocky Mountains
vurt wrote:breathehope wrote:Vurt is my messenger.
loosely translated as "vurt is stalking me"
dano
"In a sky full of people, only some want to fly,
Isn’t that crazy?"
Isn’t that crazy?"
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- KVRAF
- 3617 posts since 26 Sep, 2003 from Bradford - The Armpit of Britain
So glad this got bumped - I can't believe I didn't bump it myself as this is one of those real gems I found at KVR which I regularly play when I feel like listening to something pure & beautiful to destress myself.
It's like a soothing massage for the mind & senses.
It's like a soothing massage for the mind & senses.


