Anyway have a listen. Any stuff that should be changed and/or corrected?
It's called "Submerged" and sits at the top of http://soundcloud.com/kbeesmusic
Deep House Fusion?
-
- KVRAF
- 2268 posts since 9 Mar, 2009 from Copenhagen, Denmark
Well I haven't really done a deep house inspired track until now and before I knew it, it ended up with a smooth jazz/fusion style melody line as all my tracks tend to do these days
Anyway have a listen. Any stuff that should be changed and/or corrected?
It's called "Submerged" and sits at the top of http://soundcloud.com/kbeesmusic
Anyway have a listen. Any stuff that should be changed and/or corrected?
It's called "Submerged" and sits at the top of http://soundcloud.com/kbeesmusic
-
- KVRist
- 232 posts since 28 Oct, 2008 from Netherlands
I like the vibe of the track, it moves along quite nicely and the beat has a nice groove to it.
It could be that my ears are tricking me, but I have the feeling that there is a phase issue with the rhodes playing through the track. The first chord is panned to one side, and the panning feels a bit unnatural, though I can't exactly tell what it is.
The rhodes that playes the fills could be a little louder for my taste, I feel that it's muffled away a bit and in my view it could be a bit more on the foreground (just for the fills)
I had something of a struggle in getting the melody of the theme, more precisely I don't feel the rhythmic phrasing of the sixth bar of the theme. Perhaps you could search in finding another phrasing, since I think the notes themselves are already quite logical.
Hope this will be of use
It could be that my ears are tricking me, but I have the feeling that there is a phase issue with the rhodes playing through the track. The first chord is panned to one side, and the panning feels a bit unnatural, though I can't exactly tell what it is.
The rhodes that playes the fills could be a little louder for my taste, I feel that it's muffled away a bit and in my view it could be a bit more on the foreground (just for the fills)
I had something of a struggle in getting the melody of the theme, more precisely I don't feel the rhythmic phrasing of the sixth bar of the theme. Perhaps you could search in finding another phrasing, since I think the notes themselves are already quite logical.
Hope this will be of use
-
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 2268 posts since 9 Mar, 2009 from Copenhagen, Denmark
Something went wrong while recording this. Please disregard the upload on soundccloud. New and correct version will be up shortly
Thanks
Thanks
-
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 2268 posts since 9 Mar, 2009 from Copenhagen, Denmark
New version is up! The other one has been deleted 
This is the one to rate!
Thanks
http://soundcloud.com/kbeesmusic/k-bee- ... d-2nd-take
This is the one to rate!
Thanks
http://soundcloud.com/kbeesmusic/k-bee- ... d-2nd-take
-
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 2268 posts since 9 Mar, 2009 from Copenhagen, Denmark
-
any1particular any1particular https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=175870 - KVRian
- 988 posts since 12 Mar, 2008 from Detriot Michigan USA
I like the Rhodes solo at about 2.00....K-Bee wrote:A bit of a bump!
I'd like to hear a bit more variation-perhaps a chorus/verse/bridge?
Nice one!!!
-
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 2268 posts since 9 Mar, 2009 from Copenhagen, Denmark
Well it's hardly a rhodes solo...more like a few fillsany1particular wrote:I like the Rhodes solo at about 2.00....K-Bee wrote:A bit of a bump!
I'd like to hear a bit more variation-perhaps a chorus/verse/bridge?
Nice one!!!
Choruses/verses/bridges I thought about since they're usually elements of "normal" songwriting. This is house however, and I chose against them since house usually works with different connotations (such as feel, groove, mood and tension etc)
+ plus it was easier!
I did this in one afternoon Thanks for listening as always Chuck
