Jack Dark - Soluna (An experiment in sound-story telling.)

[Sielsynth]

Hello,

I actually like what you're doing here. I love to listen to music as I read epic novels, so I've often wanted music to match certain scenes/passages. Anyway, there are definitely some harsh elements that did not allow me to completely envision the scenes they were supposed to portray. Definitely in Fields of the Sun I did not get a sense of merriment from children playing. Overall I like the artistry of the song itself, I'm just not sure if it reflects the story as it is supposed to. Would love to hear more though, Maybe I can make my own scenes to your music.

[JackDark]

Thanks for sharing this though, and do keep experimenting.

Thank you for your critique!

[Rouqmirg]

Not exactly the fastest server in the world, so I'm waiting for the download atm...

Alright here we go: I'm listening to fields...I think the intro synth is a little too 'resonant' and I can see it interfering with some systems...

I agree some of the sounds are a bit harsh and can be grating on the ears especially w/ headphones. This is really not my style (at all), I would prefer some more harmonic and soothing stuff, which I begin to hear at the very end of this track, but then it fades away!

[andrewh]

Nice tracks, I just heard them both...I like the idea of what you're doing here...and much more 'involved' than a punk band throwing down 4 new songs at practice in 5 and a half minutes.