Seems to be "first song posting day" - so i'll hav

[Emerald Tablet]

i usualy post the first crapsong i build without paying much attention to the finetuning
so i admire your fine tuning and patience in general

good american style popsong
full sound - good clear mix
good singing
nice playing
good programming and arangement in general

not my cup of tea style wise
but i can hear the talent and the perseverance
thanks

[Sascha Franck]

These other tracks are not exactly my taste, dekky, but they're well done too for sure.
But then... I still think the voice could be grittier ;o)

[dekky]

thats as gritty as we can go

lost my vst-grittalizer license

[Glooper]

thats as gritty as we can go

Get your friend to smoke more cigarettes!...

Listening to the first song now... I love it, it's a really good song. He's got a good voice, though I feel the voice could be slightly brighter/clearer (though I am listening on crappy headphones work!).

Ben

[Glooper]

Just listened to the other two songs... both very good as well, though I prefer the first one. I feel as though I've had enough metel to last me the year with this month competition!.

Still think the voice is not quite bright enough in these two as well.

Ben

[dekky]

thanks for all the coments and the nice words.

so i reworked some things, according to the suggestions.

threw in some backwards/forward-guitar in the intro part to distract austere from the crackling

little more high eq for glooper's crappy headphones.

did the donkey tugger 'not so new, but highly effective - move two semitones up in the bridge trick' - that works really well (thanks for that), the add another bar didn't work out too well so i stuck to the 8bar scheme.

and finally added some really ridiculous doo-doo-doohs in the last chorus.

so this is the final demo-version than, me thinks.

http://www.dekonstrukt.de/kvr/cigaretteswine.mp3

thanks again for your help guys, hoping for more next time (not next year, 4months and 3 weeks - promised).

[AndrewSimon]

Excellent complete work.
We need more of this "not my style" music here on KVR.