The Wedding of Heina and Jesse
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 950 posts since 30 Nov, 2004
Hi all,
I wrote this for our wedding. What do you think?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GlbCzrnovTs
I wrote this for our wedding. What do you think?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GlbCzrnovTs
- KVRAF
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
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Music - 8.5
Instruments - 8
Performance - 7.5
Mix - 8.5
Overall - 8.125
Comments: Given the short length of the piece, intro is too long. Otherwise, very nice. Personally, I'd use more sustain pedal on the piano during the main part. The rhythm is kind of choppy and could use a little more fluid motion. Of course just my opinion.
Music - 8.5
Instruments - 8
Performance - 7.5
Mix - 8.5
Overall - 8.125
Comments: Given the short length of the piece, intro is too long. Otherwise, very nice. Personally, I'd use more sustain pedal on the piano during the main part. The rhythm is kind of choppy and could use a little more fluid motion. Of course just my opinion.
- KVRAF
- 11515 posts since 13 Mar, 2009 from UK
Short and sweet. I enjoyed the chord progressions which were very well integrated but managed to maintain interest throughout. The rhythm was also reminiscent of a wedding march without becoming too rigid or "martial" in character.
Good work and Congratulations
Good work and Congratulations
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 950 posts since 30 Nov, 2004
seismic1 wrote:Short and sweet. I enjoyed the chord progressions which were very well integrated but managed to maintain interest throughout. The rhythm was also reminiscent of a wedding march without becoming too rigid or "martial" in character.
Good work and Congratulations
Thanks! It was kinda stressy what the reaction would be. It was the first public playing of my music where I was present myself, and to top it off I played live for the first time later too. But the reaction was great!
- KVRist
- 133 posts since 10 Dec, 2017
Personally i love the intro travelling the distance as fdar is it does, it shows the dedication, but i confess the theme and imagery in the video suggest to me that you are holding onto a memory if i'm not mistaken (makes sense to me ).wagtunes wrote:
Comments: Given the short length of the piece, intro is too long. Otherwise, very nice. Personally, I'd use more sustain pedal on the piano during the main part. The rhythm is kind of choppy and could use a little more fluid motion. Of course just my opinion.
Nice lil' piece.
Definitely expandable if you wanted to, the piano sounds very rich and clean.I like it.
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- KVRian
- 884 posts since 3 Jan, 2016
It sounds like wedding bliss. A nice blissful song. Ah, but some of the bliss will one day fade and you’ll be old friends. So enjoy you lives together and some day compose your wedding anniversary song.
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 950 posts since 30 Nov, 2004
I wanted to build the tension and the suspense as this was playing while we were coming up. Actually, you only heard the piano when we were not there yet, and as soon as we showed up the voilins kicked inDJ LFD wrote: ↑Mon Aug 20, 2018 10:02 pmPersonally i love the intro travelling the distance as fdar is it does, it shows the dedication, but i confess the theme and imagery in the video suggest to me that you are holding onto a memory if i'm not mistaken (makes sense to me ).wagtunes wrote:
Comments: Given the short length of the piece, intro is too long. Otherwise, very nice. Personally, I'd use more sustain pedal on the piano during the main part. The rhythm is kind of choppy and could use a little more fluid motion. Of course just my opinion.
Nice lil' piece.
Definitely expandable if you wanted to, the piano sounds very rich and clean.I like it.