The Wagtunes Corner
- KVRAF
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- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Another one from "Sins Of The Father"
Sins And Sanctuary
What are my crimes
I need to know
If I am to die
Who'll cast the stone
Even the wicked
Gets a reprieve
Sins and sanctuary
Who is to say
If I've done wrong
Where does it say that
I must be gone
Even the wicked
Gets a reprieve
Sins and sanctuary
https://soundcloud.com/steven-wagenheim ... the-father
Sins And Sanctuary
What are my crimes
I need to know
If I am to die
Who'll cast the stone
Even the wicked
Gets a reprieve
Sins and sanctuary
Who is to say
If I've done wrong
Where does it say that
I must be gone
Even the wicked
Gets a reprieve
Sins and sanctuary
https://soundcloud.com/steven-wagenheim ... the-father
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
From my CD "Amp It Up"
Deadbolt
Lock the door and throw away the key
Make believe you never heard of me
Broke my heart boy that is what you did
Now of you at last I will be rid
There's just one last thing to do
Go and throw the deadbolt
Permanently
Go and throw the deadbolt
You're dead to me
Go and throw the deadbolt
Why can't you see
I'm free
Did you think I'd let it just go on
After all the love we had was gone
Using me just like a worn out rag
Self abuse is not my chosen bag
So there's just one thing to do
Repeat Chorus 2x
https://soundcloud.com/steven-wagenheim ... /amp-it-up
Deadbolt
Lock the door and throw away the key
Make believe you never heard of me
Broke my heart boy that is what you did
Now of you at last I will be rid
There's just one last thing to do
Go and throw the deadbolt
Permanently
Go and throw the deadbolt
You're dead to me
Go and throw the deadbolt
Why can't you see
I'm free
Did you think I'd let it just go on
After all the love we had was gone
Using me just like a worn out rag
Self abuse is not my chosen bag
So there's just one thing to do
Repeat Chorus 2x
https://soundcloud.com/steven-wagenheim ... /amp-it-up
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Another one from "No Signal"
Dangerous Curves
Out of my way I'm coming through
To take this world like a bull in a China shop
The sky is green the sky is blue
But when I'm done the whole damn world will drop
I'm coming with my dangerous curves
Hold onto your skin
Dangerous curves
Ah ah ah
Dangerous curves
Take one on your chin
Coming at you
With my dangerous curves
Enjoy the ride the fun's begun
Popping a wheelie and rev up my engine now
I'll take you to the mountain top
And when I'm done the whole damn world will drop
Repeat Chorus
I know you'll have the time of your life
Jump on my back seat and rev up my engine now
I'll take you to the mountain top
And when I'm done the whole damn world will drop
Repeat Chorus
https://soundcloud.com/steven-wagenheim ... /no-signal
Dangerous Curves
Out of my way I'm coming through
To take this world like a bull in a China shop
The sky is green the sky is blue
But when I'm done the whole damn world will drop
I'm coming with my dangerous curves
Hold onto your skin
Dangerous curves
Ah ah ah
Dangerous curves
Take one on your chin
Coming at you
With my dangerous curves
Enjoy the ride the fun's begun
Popping a wheelie and rev up my engine now
I'll take you to the mountain top
And when I'm done the whole damn world will drop
Repeat Chorus
I know you'll have the time of your life
Jump on my back seat and rev up my engine now
I'll take you to the mountain top
And when I'm done the whole damn world will drop
Repeat Chorus
https://soundcloud.com/steven-wagenheim ... /no-signal
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Another one from "Once Upon A Time"
Dragons And Dreams
Dragons and dreams
Are the things that I know
But it seems like they've left me so long ago
Dragons and dreams
Are the things that I fear
Yet I long to have them always near
He would slay one just for me
Until my dreams would come to be
Dragons and dreams
Are the things that I crave
Til my prince comes for my heart to save
(Ad lib vocals)
He would slay one just for me
Until my dreams would come to be
Dragons and dreams
Are the things that I crave
Til my prince comes for my heart to save
https://soundcloud.com/steven-wagenheim ... pon-a-time
Dragons And Dreams
Dragons and dreams
Are the things that I know
But it seems like they've left me so long ago
Dragons and dreams
Are the things that I fear
Yet I long to have them always near
He would slay one just for me
Until my dreams would come to be
Dragons and dreams
Are the things that I crave
Til my prince comes for my heart to save
(Ad lib vocals)
He would slay one just for me
Until my dreams would come to be
Dragons and dreams
Are the things that I crave
Til my prince comes for my heart to save
https://soundcloud.com/steven-wagenheim ... pon-a-time
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- addled muppet weed
- 105855 posts since 26 Jan, 2003 from through the looking glass
dragons and dreams
id actually like to hear this sung by the guy from mercury rev
even before hearing it, the lyrics jumped out at me, they'd fit perfect over spiders and flies
id actually like to hear this sung by the guy from mercury rev
even before hearing it, the lyrics jumped out at me, they'd fit perfect over spiders and flies
- KVRAF
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- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
If I knew him personally, I'd ask him. lolvurt wrote:dragons and dreams
id actually like to hear this sung by the guy from mercury rev
even before hearing it, the lyrics jumped out at me, they'd fit perfect over spiders and flies
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- addled muppet weed
- 105855 posts since 26 Jan, 2003 from through the looking glass
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Oh I know. I've been told that my voice is similar to his. I kind of hear it back when I could sing fairly well, but not these days.vurt wrote:i love mercury rev. so that was a compliment, just so you know
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aaron aardvark aaron aardvark https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=248508
- KVRAF
- 2667 posts since 22 Jan, 2011 from near Los Angeles
wagtunes,
Thank you for the review! Now your song "Dragons & Dreams": not every day you hear a song with a waltz beat (at least part of the time) around here. The orchestral sounds sound pretty real. All of the melodies (including vocals) are pleasant. The artificial high pitch vocals give the song a "children's song vibe", which may or may not be your goal. I would be curious what sort of vibe a good real female singer could put on the song. Nice song.
Thank you for the review! Now your song "Dragons & Dreams": not every day you hear a song with a waltz beat (at least part of the time) around here. The orchestral sounds sound pretty real. All of the melodies (including vocals) are pleasant. The artificial high pitch vocals give the song a "children's song vibe", which may or may not be your goal. I would be curious what sort of vibe a good real female singer could put on the song. Nice song.
You can hear my original music at this link: https://www.soundclick.com/artist/defau ... dID=224436
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Thanks for the listen Aaron. Don't get a lot of them. lolaaron aardvark wrote:wagtunes,
Thank you for the review! Now your song "Dragons & Dreams": not every day you hear a song with a waltz beat (at least part of the time) around here. The orchestral sounds sound pretty real. All of the melodies (including vocals) are pleasant. The artificial high pitch vocals give the song a "children's song vibe", which may or may not be your goal. I would be curious what sort of vibe a good real female singer could put on the song. Nice song.
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- KVRAF
- 15517 posts since 13 Oct, 2009
I want to hear donkey tugger cover Dragons and Dreams....I assume that dragon here refers to heroin, i.e., chasing the dragon, no?
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
No, actually the song is from my Broadway styled CD "Once Upon A Time" which is about a princess who comes to New York City looking for her prince who she lost touch with many years before. The song is essentially her desires to go back to the life that she had with him but until then, her thoughts of dragons and dreams are all she has to keep her company.ghettosynth wrote:I want to hear donkey tugger cover Dragons and Dreams....I assume that dragon here refers to heroin, i.e., chasing the dragon, no?
The CD is probably one of my best concepts. Well, to me anyway considering that I have no talent and suck at everything. So relatively speaking that is.
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- KVRAF
- 15517 posts since 13 Oct, 2009
Yeah, but, it works just as well, better I think, as a heroin reference. It's all in the delivery. donkey tugger is the closest thing we have to a resident Lou Reed. And coming to New York? That's even better! Isn't New York the heroin capital of the world. What else would our lonely, wait for it, heroine, have to keep her company in New York, but, wait for it, heroin?wagtunes wrote:No, actually the song is from my Broadway styled CD "Once Upon A Time" which is about a princess who comes to New York City looking for her prince who she lost touch with many years before. The song is essentially her desires to go back to the life that she had with him but until then, her thoughts of dragons and dreams are all she has to keep her company.ghettosynth wrote:I want to hear donkey tugger cover Dragons and Dreams....I assume that dragon here refers to heroin, i.e., chasing the dragon, no?
The CD is probably one of my best concepts. Well, to me anyway considering that I have no talent and suck at everything. So relatively speaking that is.
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Sure, let's turn a kid's fairy tale into a drug induced hallucination.ghettosynth wrote:Yeah, but, it works just as well, better I think, as a heroin reference. It's all in the delivery. donkey tugger is the closest thing we have to a resident Lou Reed. And coming to New York? That's even better! Isn't New York the heroin capital of the world. What else would our lonely, wait for it, heroine, have to keep her company in New York, but, wait for it, heroin?wagtunes wrote:No, actually the song is from my Broadway styled CD "Once Upon A Time" which is about a princess who comes to New York City looking for her prince who she lost touch with many years before. The song is essentially her desires to go back to the life that she had with him but until then, her thoughts of dragons and dreams are all she has to keep her company.ghettosynth wrote:I want to hear donkey tugger cover Dragons and Dreams....I assume that dragon here refers to heroin, i.e., chasing the dragon, no?
The CD is probably one of my best concepts. Well, to me anyway considering that I have no talent and suck at everything. So relatively speaking that is.
Works for me.
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- addled muppet weed
- 105855 posts since 26 Jan, 2003 from through the looking glass