2 for 1: Magisterial Horizon / Things May Continue
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Shane Sanders
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 4145 posts since 10 Oct, 2002 from Nashville, TN USA
I've spent one evening on each of these compositions so far, which is how it usually happens for me. If I'm into it enough to push through various arrangement hurdles and get rid of clunky melodic choices sooner rather than later, I know I'm on to something. These were realized on my laptop, which purposely has 1/10th of the plugins I actually own. I need to take that approach more often as it really forces you to just live with things and move on with the actual composing.
Don't let the short little intro on the first one fool you as the piece changes direction right away.
Magisterial Horizon
http://shanesanders.com/wp-content/uplo ... orizon.mp3
Things May Continue
http://shanesanders.com/wp-content/uplo ... ntinue.mp3
I would appreciate any feedback, whether good or bad. I've been trying really hard to simplify things and embrace 80s ideas and production approaches.
Don't let the short little intro on the first one fool you as the piece changes direction right away.
Magisterial Horizon
http://shanesanders.com/wp-content/uplo ... orizon.mp3
Things May Continue
http://shanesanders.com/wp-content/uplo ... ntinue.mp3
I would appreciate any feedback, whether good or bad. I've been trying really hard to simplify things and embrace 80s ideas and production approaches.
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aaron aardvark
- KVRAF
- 2494 posts since 22 Jan, 2011 from near Los Angeles
Shane,
Thank you for the reviews! Now "Magisterial Horizon": does sound rather 80's, which is fine by me! Some nice vocals would be nice, though perhaps you don't sing. Regardless, it sounds very nice; nice melodies & synth sounds. "Things May Continue": same comments on this song.
Thank you for the reviews! Now "Magisterial Horizon": does sound rather 80's, which is fine by me! Some nice vocals would be nice, though perhaps you don't sing. Regardless, it sounds very nice; nice melodies & synth sounds. "Things May Continue": same comments on this song.
You can hear my original music at this link: https://www.soundclick.com/artist/defau ... dID=224436
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eassae
- KVRian
- 1052 posts since 18 May, 2021
Magisterial Horizion has a really nice flow, cool melody, and nice sound design. The drums and the bass sat a tad far back in the mix for my taste, but that may be just a matter of taste.
Things May Continue has a nice narrative quality. Really like the progression that starts around 1:30->1:57.
Things May Continue has a nice narrative quality. Really like the progression that starts around 1:30->1:57.
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"Arts and crafts have been canceled due to poor taste"—Bill Murray, Meatballs
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Shane Sanders
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 4145 posts since 10 Oct, 2002 from Nashville, TN USA
aaron aardvark wrote: ↑Sun Mar 19, 2023 2:26 pm Shane,
Thank you for the reviews! Now "Magisterial Horizon": does sound rather 80's, which is fine by me! Some nice vocals would be nice, though perhaps you don't sing. Regardless, it sounds very nice; nice melodies & synth sounds. "Things May Continue": same comments on this song.
Thanks! Appreciate the feedback.
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Shane Sanders
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 4145 posts since 10 Oct, 2002 from Nashville, TN USA
Yeah, I think you're right. Will brighten up those instruments in the next editing pass and push the energy a bit.eassae wrote: ↑Mon Mar 20, 2023 10:30 am Magisterial Horizion has a really nice flow, cool melody, and nice sound design. The drums and the bass sat a tad far back in the mix for my taste, but that may be just a matter of taste.
Things May Continue has a nice narrative quality. Really like the progression that starts around 1:30->1:57.
