[change your life - rock] "jenny" 🎸 ♫

[enroe]

Have you ever felt like you needed a change in your life?
Jenny has such a desire - and this is her song:

Click here for "Jenny"
Note: This requires clicking the grey "play"-button.

Your thoughts on this are greatly appreciated.
Enjoy!

There's also a direct link: Jenny.

[markkuja]

Nice rock song. I liked. Good vocs and sounds.

[enroe]

Nice rock song. I liked. Good vocs and sounds.

Thank you , markkuja! Glad you like it!

[enroe]

We have slightly changed and improved the mix:

-- Clean guitar eq-ing changed
-- Vocal deessing improved
-- First break extended - more "air"

Have fun!

[Allomerus]

Top track enroe. I love the passion and energy of it.
The opening riff is great (you should have a listen to "Short Memory" by Aussie band "Midnight Oil" which is similar)
Cool bridge. Interesting ending.
Well done!

[lingyai]

This is really good. Only suggestion: make the lead vocal somewhat more "in your face", as suits a rock track like this. Would give it extra oompf and "raw rebel" sound which would make a good contrast with the more "studio smooth" backing. It's the lead but it's basically not taking centre stage; right now it "sits safely in the mix" when it should pop. Might be fixable with, say, 2-4 more db. My guess is that the singer was the mixer, and got (unjustifiably) self-conscious.

[seismic1]

This is probably the best mix I have heard from you (so far). The separation/definition between the instruments is great, even in the louder/denser moments. It's good songwriting, too. I particularly liked the way the song flowed into and out of the "Interlude 1" section. I originally thought the ending was very sudden, but I'm used to it now, and I think it fits the narrative of the song.

Good work

[enroe]

Top track enroe. I love the passion and energy of it.
The opening riff is great (you should have a listen to "Short Memory" by Aussie band "Midnight Oil" which is similar)
Cool bridge. Interesting ending.
Well done!

Ohh, thanks for the mention and the comparison to
"Short memory" by Midnight Oil. Everyone here knows
Midnight Oil - and that is a great honor.

Thank you, Allomerus!

[eassae]

I dug the melody right off. The harpsichord compliments the guitar nicely. Cool story telling. I really like the accompanying illustrations to this one as well.

[aaron aardvark]

enroe,
Thank you for the review! Now your song: I like the "Bowling For Soup" type vocals. Everything sounds good instrumentally. Surprised by the orchestral string bridge. Nice guitar solo. Nice song, melodies, and recording!

[Jesse Gorter]

I love it! Great vocals, and loving the guitar playing on it

[folderol]

Good well balanced song. Well done.

[enroe]

This is really good. Only suggestion: make the lead vocal somewhat more "in your face", as suits a rock track like this. Would give it extra oompf and "raw rebel" sound which would make a good contrast with the more "studio smooth" backing. It's the lead but it's basically not taking centre stage; right now it "sits safely in the mix" when it should pop. Might be fixable with, say, 2-4 more db. My guess is that the singer was the mixer, and got (unjustifiably) self-conscious.

Thank you, lingyai! We thought the lead vocals were already
very good up front. But we will of course reconsider your
suggestion - thank you for that!

[Jesse Gorter]

the chorus or so at 1 min? I like it a lot, distorted guitars, great singing. Also really like the intro guitar that runs throughout, might wanna sample it ^^?

[enroe]

This is probably the best mix I have heard from you (so far). The separation/definition between the instruments is great, even in the louder/denser moments. It's good songwriting, too. I particularly liked the way the song flowed into and out of the "Interlude 1" section. I originally thought the ending was very sudden, but I'm used to it now, and I think it fits the narrative of the song.

Good work

Oh, thank you seismic1! Yes, the ending is a bit sudden - we didn't
want the song to be too long.