say no to crack cocaine!!

[djsubject]

A Ski Rize Studios Production!!

http://www.skirize.adbe.org/lick_crack.wma

feed back welcome



Subz

Artist; Deadly Hunta

[Lunch Money]

Excellent! Most excellent! I'm not all that particularly useful for further comments at the moment. The vox are simply awesome, and the groove fits perfectly with them.

My only criticism is that I'd like to hear a bit more variety, like a more easily discernable 'chorus' or refrain. Something for the crowd to latch onto. There's no real hook at the moment, despite the addictive lyrics and groove.

[djsubject]

Excellent! Most excellent! I'm not all that particularly useful for further comments at the moment. The vox are simply awesome, and the groove fits perfectly with them.

My only criticism is that I'd like to hear a bit more variety, like a more easily discernable 'chorus' or refrain. Something for the crowd to latch onto. There's no real hook at the moment, despite the addictive lyrics and groove.

thank you

the vox i used are from a old 2002\3 vox i recorded on a sm58 in a open room

so hopfully a total re voice will take place

if not i'll get a set of backings off him for the coruse,

allthough! the hole track was spat in one take & so was the backing

so i have 5 different corus takes on the main & 5 on the backing

so if i stop being so lazy i could fill out the corus alot better

Subz

ps, IIRs, i used your SC plugin on the main sample & drums to cut bass from them only when the bass plays

it was a big help THANX!!!!! i think the price of £39.99 is well worth it

[ornitholestes]

Hey, that's catchy! Nice work, Subz. I like the vocals the way they are. They've got a great "immediate" quality to them. I agree with Lunch Money - it just needs a little variety in there, maybe a change in the instrumentation for a few bars to make a section or two stand out. Aside from that it's great. Excellent stuff.

Mike

[AD80]

Ahh man I'm diggin this! Nice track.

[lharless]

this is a beach song! i should know! i just got back from the beach! ...yes im a qualified beach music coneusoiueioooriirrr (sp?)

i'd like to see this getting some airplay in america. if you like, ill start playing it on my car stereo when you get the hook put in there. want me to write a hook for you? personally i think you should throw in a sampled verse of "don't bogart that joint my friend"... that'd set it up right dude!

OH YEAH!!!

...ahem... excuse me, im on antibiotics this week.

[dealwithit]

This is pretty cool. On my setup, the vocals are just a touch too low in level, and yes, it needs a bit of variety. I can't understand a single word he says!
Well, maybe one or two...

Nice work.