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On a bit of a roll composing at the moment. Here's my latest composition, which is a touch different to my usual fare. Enjoy!!

https://soundcloud.com/biodiode/final-destination
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Hi Adrian,

As you already know, I enjoyed this tune of yours. It's a pity no one at KVR ventured to comment...

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Really sets the mood right away. Theres always something different in tracks that do that right away.
In my opinion that lead synth could use some low pass/reduce high soaring. Might sit better with mood, but thats just my opinion and in new in this so. Underlying harmony is cool, reminds tv/film music(in a good way).
I wanted some progression or new part towards end, but again, just my opinion.

Good track.

-Daniel

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Thanks for the feedback guys.

@Daniel - I always like to try and set the theme at the beginning it sort of gives the listener an idea of what the track is about, although I try to put one or two unexpected parts in.

Whether you are new to this or not your opinion is valid and I always take constructive criticism as a way of learning.
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Well done, evolves nicely during the time, keeps the listener´s attention, and sounds well-mixed too...

... if not for... "the lead", got to agree with DanielF here.

I personally find it distractingly loud plus a softer wave (sine with a bit of lfo-vibrato coming in after 1-1.5 seconds for that nostalgic feel on the longer notes) might sit in the mix better.

Keep it up!

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