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MountainKing · Post by **MountainKing** » Thu Feb 16, 2017 11:10 pm

Yes, here it is - "Immer noch":

https://soundcloud.com/stoabach/sets/stoabach-playlist

You also may listen to my other songs.

Cheers Jens

thomekk · Post by **thomekk** » Fri Feb 17, 2017 12:07 am

Fine catchy lovesong and a well balanced mix!
I like the orchestral intermezzo at the end - nicer than the usual solo guitar, which could have been expected here.
Good work

MountainKing · Post by **MountainKing** » Fri Feb 17, 2017 8:08 am

Thank you, tomekk, for your Input.

Much appreciated!

popmoney · Post by **popmoney** » Fri Feb 17, 2017 10:01 am

I like the singers voice and the vocal arrangement. The mix isn't quite there though Imo. It sounds like someone singing to a backing track. The voice could be more "in" the music. You could make the guitars heavier with a vocal like that too. Liked the overall arrangement and the instrumental break at the end also. Good stuff.

nineofkings · Post by **nineofkings** » Fri Feb 17, 2017 5:39 pm

I agree with the critique about the voice. It's better in the chorus (which is catchy) than in the verse. I think it's just a level thing, and turning the lead vocal down during the verses could fix it. I also like the orchestral bridge. It was really unexpected and added a great character to the song.

MountainKing · Post by **MountainKing** » Fri Feb 17, 2017 6:04 pm

Many thanks for your opinion.

Much appreciated.

I don't if I will dig into this again. But I will take this into account next time mixing a song. Or even "producing" in the earlier stages ....

New german rock song online - feedback appreciated