Working - Kind of TechNo

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rvkYoDleFool
KVRist
58 posts since 4 Mar, 2013 from Germany

Post Tue Jan 23, 2018 9:15 pm

A track i started december last year and finished it. Not really finished but i have no motivation anymore.

https://soundcloud.com/m2k1/m2k1-working

winkie00
KVRist
191 posts since 9 Jul, 2008 from Newcastle Upon Tyne

Re: Working - Kind of TechNo

Post Thu Jan 25, 2018 10:44 am

More reverb and delay on the drums. I can hear what you are trying to get. Don't give up, it just takes more practice than anybody thinks. Im in the same boat : ))

JKillz
KVRist
181 posts since 30 Dec, 2017 from USA

Re: Working - Kind of TechNo

Post Thu Jan 25, 2018 4:32 pm

I like what you have going here. Certainly has a feel that I am typically drawn to. My only concern is that the track runs longer than needed. It is very similar with some minor differences for 3 passes (at least that I can hear from a first impression). You can prob end it around 5:20ish and call it a day. Or... you can add some new twists and turns in the 3rd verse. You do already to a degree, but they are not impactful enough imo.

In the end, I very much liked this track, keep'em coming :)

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