This is a fast paced piece based on percussion. Against the percussion are long theme notes that might remind the horn of a train coming from a distance.
Comments welcomed..Cheers.
https://soundcloud.com/nominal6/ghosttrain
Nominal6 : Ghost Train - fast paced, percussive
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 3654 posts since 3 Nov, 2015
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- KVRAF
- 7691 posts since 11 Jun, 2006
very interesting "different" sounding track. i enjoyed it for the most part,
but i think the volume levels could have been mixed to make the sounds play better together.... just my 2 pesos.
but i think the volume levels could have been mixed to make the sounds play better together.... just my 2 pesos.
HW SYNTHS [KORG T2EX - AKAI AX80 - YAMAHA SY77 - ENSONIQ VFX]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]
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- KVRist
- 251 posts since 19 Jan, 2004 from United Kingdom
Some good elements in this but the deep sound that comes in and out is a bit abrupt. Perhaps try fading it in and out to create a sweeping effect.
Not sure the final part works either.
Try fiddling with the structure some more.
Keep it up!
Not sure the final part works either.
Try fiddling with the structure some more.
Keep it up!
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 3654 posts since 3 Nov, 2015
Thanks for the comments - much appreciated. It's with specific comments that I can vision out of the box so to speak.
@layzer: yes, it could be smoothed out somewhat, in the sense of providing a more enjozable listening experience. It's a bit on the raw side in its current state.
@Saffran: The idea of having some strings in lieu of percussion, for instance, is very interesting. Or strings in general. I'll consider it, thanks !
@-Fature-: I agree that the deep bass sounds coming in and out are a bit abrupt. Following your comment I'm thinking that the really deep bass sounds should be resevred for the choruses. About the final part I'm not sure what you meant.
Cheers !
@layzer: yes, it could be smoothed out somewhat, in the sense of providing a more enjozable listening experience. It's a bit on the raw side in its current state.
@Saffran: The idea of having some strings in lieu of percussion, for instance, is very interesting. Or strings in general. I'll consider it, thanks !
@-Fature-: I agree that the deep bass sounds coming in and out are a bit abrupt. Following your comment I'm thinking that the really deep bass sounds should be resevred for the choruses. About the final part I'm not sure what you meant.
Cheers !
