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guiraud · Post by **guiraud** » Sat Jul 18, 2020 7:19 pm

https://soundcloud.com/guiraud/b-1

Slow jazzy-hop

thanks for listening, and i always open to any feedback.

The Noodlist · Post by **The Noodlist** » Sun Jul 19, 2020 9:14 am

Super, I really enjoyed it.
I could see it being part of a collection of tunes with no breaks between transitions, ideal for relaxing.

guiraud · Post by **guiraud** » Wed Jul 22, 2020 12:37 pm

The Noodlist wrote: ↑Sun Jul 19, 2020 9:14 am Super, I really enjoyed it.
I could see it being part of a collection of tunes with no breaks between transitions, ideal for relaxing.

Thanks a lot!!

DanielPersson · Post by **DanielPersson** » Fri Jul 24, 2020 11:15 am

I like the feel of the song, but I'm not so fond of the drumbeat.

I would like to hear the drums a bit more "upbeat" and eventful.

djeryld · Post by **djeryld** » Fri Jul 24, 2020 6:54 pm

some nice changes here ... moodychill.

how come it's been sittin for 3 years?

JCJR · Post by **JCJR** » Fri Jul 24, 2020 11:22 pm

Nice changes playing and arranging. Good tones and mix.

Only thing I could suggest either:

_1_ Hire a drummer? (No i'm not a drummer).

_2_ Your laid back minimal beat aint that bad. A tasteful drummer might decide to play not much busier.

However imo the snare is mixed loud enough to be distracting and has too agressive timbre in that mix. Maybe use a low tuned piccolo snare hit lightly with blastix. Mixed a few dB quieter in the mix and possibly semi buried in algorithmic pitch shifty reverb?

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Sat Jul 25, 2020 5:42 am

pretty good for getting her in the mood

a sax line would seal the deal.

guiraud · Post by **guiraud** » Tue Jul 28, 2020 6:31 am

djeryld wrote: ↑Fri Jul 24, 2020 6:54 pm some nice changes here ... moodychill.

how come it's been sittin for 3 years?

I got a my first job 3 years ago, and lost my life balance.

now i have some time to make music, soonly this song will be changed better!
I give you ridiculous answer.. anyway, thanks for listening!

guiraud · Post by **guiraud** » Tue Jul 28, 2020 6:39 am

DanielPersson wrote: ↑Fri Jul 24, 2020 11:15 am I like the feel of the song, but I'm not so fond of the drumbeat.

I would like to hear the drums a bit more "upbeat" and eventful.

Yes, I already know that drum sounds are wrong.
cause my 3-years ago musical ability was not sensitive..
This song will be changed to not lay-back too much.

thanks for your feedback!

guiraud · Post by **guiraud** » Tue Jul 28, 2020 6:48 am

JCJR wrote: ↑Fri Jul 24, 2020 11:22 pm Nice changes playing and arranging. Good tones and mix.

Only thing I could suggest either:

_1_ Hire a drummer? (No i'm not a drummer).

_2_ Your laid back minimal beat aint that bad. A tasteful drummer might decide to play not much busier.

However imo the snare is mixed loud enough to be distracting and has too agressive timbre in that mix. Maybe use a low tuned piccolo snare hit lightly with blastix. Mixed a few dB quieter in the mix and possibly semi buried in algorithmic pitch shifty reverb?

Yes, this song made three years ago, need to fix drum sounds.
now I can make it better.
really good idea for mix, same opinion for aggressive timbre. I'll take your advice.
thanks for your feedback! (It's so detailed, really helpful!)

guiraud · Post by **guiraud** » Tue Jul 28, 2020 7:02 am

layzer wrote: ↑Sat Jul 25, 2020 5:42 am pretty good for getting her in the mood
a sax line would seal the deal.

Yes! It will be better sax line instead of vst guitar.
but I've always been used midi and not have musician friends..
Anyway I'll have to consider it, thanks a lot!

noylis · Post by **noylis** » Tue Jul 28, 2020 1:50 pm

Great chill out track and well produced

silenthill2006 · Post by **silenthill2006** » Tue Jul 28, 2020 8:49 pm

I like the vibe of this track. The loud snare is a little distracting and the drums probably need to be redone. However, I really enjoy this overall.

djeryld · Post by **djeryld** » Wed Jul 29, 2020 1:33 am

glad you gave me a ridiculous answer!
and glad you’re back where it’s at!

guiraud · Post by **guiraud** » Wed Feb 24, 2021 6:37 am

It's already been 7 months.
recently i started modifying this track and almost done.
Thank you all guys.
and.. um.. stay safe.

[Chillhop] Peach