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guiraud
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21 posts since 30 Mar, 2020

Post Sat Jul 18, 2020 11:19 am

https://soundcloud.com/guiraud/b-1


Slow jazzy-hop

thanks for listening, and i always open to any feedback. :party:

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The Noodlist
KVRAF
2713 posts since 16 Aug, 2017 from UK

Post Sun Jul 19, 2020 1:14 am

Super, I really enjoyed it.
I could see it being part of a collection of tunes with no breaks between transitions, ideal for relaxing.
Currently trying to turn noise into music. :neutral:

guiraud
KVRer
21 posts since 30 Mar, 2020

Post Wed Jul 22, 2020 4:37 am

The Noodlist wrote:
Sun Jul 19, 2020 1:14 am
Super, I really enjoyed it.
I could see it being part of a collection of tunes with no breaks between transitions, ideal for relaxing.
Thanks a lot!!
:love:

DanielPersson
KVRist
38 posts since 27 Jan, 2016

Post Fri Jul 24, 2020 3:15 am

I like the feel of the song, but I'm not so fond of the drumbeat.

I would like to hear the drums a bit more "upbeat" and eventful.

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djeryld
KVRer
16 posts since 24 Jul, 2020 from NYC region

Post Fri Jul 24, 2020 10:54 am

some nice changes here ... moodychill.

how come it's been sittin for 3 years?

JCJR
KVRAF
2993 posts since 17 Apr, 2005 from S.E. TN

Post Fri Jul 24, 2020 3:22 pm

Nice changes playing and arranging. Good tones and mix.

Only thing I could suggest either:

_1_ Hire a drummer? (No i'm not a drummer). :)

_2_ Your laid back minimal beat aint that bad. A tasteful drummer might decide to play not much busier.

However imo the snare is mixed loud enough to be distracting and has too agressive timbre in that mix. Maybe use a low tuned piccolo snare hit lightly with blastix. Mixed a few dB quieter in the mix and possibly semi buried in algorithmic pitch shifty reverb?

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layzer
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6905 posts since 11 Jun, 2006

Post Fri Jul 24, 2020 9:42 pm

pretty good for getting her in the mood :idea:
a sax line would seal the deal.
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guiraud
KVRer
21 posts since 30 Mar, 2020

Post Mon Jul 27, 2020 10:31 pm

djeryld wrote:
Fri Jul 24, 2020 10:54 am
some nice changes here ... moodychill.

how come it's been sittin for 3 years?


I got a my first job 3 years ago, and lost my life balance. :dog:
now i have some time to make music, soonly this song will be changed better!
I give you ridiculous answer.. anyway, thanks for listening!
:tu:

guiraud
KVRer
21 posts since 30 Mar, 2020

Post Mon Jul 27, 2020 10:39 pm

DanielPersson wrote:
Fri Jul 24, 2020 3:15 am
I like the feel of the song, but I'm not so fond of the drumbeat.

I would like to hear the drums a bit more "upbeat" and eventful.
Yes, I already know that drum sounds are wrong.
cause my 3-years ago musical ability was not sensitive..
This song will be changed to not lay-back too much.

thanks for your feedback! :tu:

guiraud
KVRer
21 posts since 30 Mar, 2020

Post Mon Jul 27, 2020 10:48 pm

JCJR wrote:
Fri Jul 24, 2020 3:22 pm
Nice changes playing and arranging. Good tones and mix.

Only thing I could suggest either:

_1_ Hire a drummer? (No i'm not a drummer). :)

_2_ Your laid back minimal beat aint that bad. A tasteful drummer might decide to play not much busier.

However imo the snare is mixed loud enough to be distracting and has too agressive timbre in that mix. Maybe use a low tuned piccolo snare hit lightly with blastix. Mixed a few dB quieter in the mix and possibly semi buried in algorithmic pitch shifty reverb?
Yes, this song made three years ago, need to fix drum sounds.
now I can make it better.
really good idea for mix, same opinion for aggressive timbre. I'll take your advice.
thanks for your feedback! (It's so detailed, really helpful!) :love:

guiraud
KVRer
21 posts since 30 Mar, 2020

Post Mon Jul 27, 2020 11:02 pm

layzer wrote:
Fri Jul 24, 2020 9:42 pm
pretty good for getting her in the mood :idea:
a sax line would seal the deal.

Yes! It will be better sax line instead of vst guitar.
but I've always been used midi and not have musician friends..
Anyway I'll have to consider it, thanks a lot! :tu:

noylis
KVRist
90 posts since 26 Nov, 2009

Post Tue Jul 28, 2020 5:50 am

Great chill out track and well produced

silenthill2006
KVRian
534 posts since 16 Nov, 2006

Post Tue Jul 28, 2020 12:49 pm

I like the vibe of this track. The loud snare is a little distracting and the drums probably need to be redone. However, I really enjoy this overall.
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djeryld
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16 posts since 24 Jul, 2020 from NYC region

Post Tue Jul 28, 2020 5:33 pm

glad you gave me a ridiculous answer!
and glad you’re back where it’s at!

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