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Genetic_Junk
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2725 posts since 22 Dec, 2004

Post Tue Nov 08, 2022 2:38 pm

Variations on a cool riff: https://archive.org/download/asong2f/Au ... nal%29.mp3

Clavinet - Arturia Clavinet V
Guitars - Nembrini JMP Pro
Bass - Nembrini Blackice
Drums -Superior Drummer 3 using Custom & Vintage SDX

edit: Rev 1 mix: https://archive.org/download/asongfr1/A ... 201%29.mp3
Last edited by Genetic_Junk on Thu Nov 10, 2022 4:23 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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seismic1
KVRAF
10977 posts since 13 Mar, 2009 from UK

Post Thu Nov 10, 2022 3:46 pm

Nice job with the variations. They kept up my interest throughout. I think the volume of the lead after approx. 2:18 could have been a little higher relative to the clav.

Good work :)

Genetic_Junk
KVRAF
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2725 posts since 22 Dec, 2004

Post Thu Nov 10, 2022 4:10 pm

Thanks for listening and commenting. :) Agreed on the lead volume. I'm going to make some adjustments.

enroe
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1992 posts since 19 Mar, 2008 from germany

Post Fri Nov 11, 2022 12:50 pm

I once listened to "rev 1 Mix": I think the idea is very nice. Overall,
the mix is too queasy for me. It lacks a certain clarity that one could
actually achieve with these string instruments. Mmmhh ... :?
free mp3s + info: andy-enroe.de songs + weird stuff: enroe.de

Genetic_Junk
KVRAF
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2725 posts since 22 Dec, 2004

Post Fri Nov 11, 2022 1:55 pm

enroe wrote: Fri Nov 11, 2022 12:50 pm I once listened to "rev 1 Mix": I think the idea is very nice. Overall,
the mix is too queasy for me. It lacks a certain clarity that one could
actually achieve with these string instruments. Mmmhh ... :?
Thanks for listening and commenting. :) Do you think the lack of clarity is more due to the composition or the mixing?

Rene Asologuitar
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734 posts since 2 Apr, 2022

Post Fri Nov 11, 2022 3:22 pm

Lovely melody, and the guitar is great.
Invigorating and lovely beat, I am enjoying this composition.
Simply a beauty!!!

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eassae
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848 posts since 18 May, 2021

Post Fri Nov 11, 2022 6:50 pm

Genetic_Junk wrote: Tue Nov 08, 2022 2:38 pm Variations on a cool riff: https://archive.org/download/asong2f/Au ... nal%29.mp3

Clavinet - Arturia Clavinet V
Guitars - Nembrini JMP Pro
Bass - Nembrini Blackice
Drums -Superior Drummer 3 using Custom & Vintage SDX

edit: Rev 1 mix: https://archive.org/download/asongfr1/A ... 201%29.mp3
Love that little moment at :20 and also that short little major chord right before the change in the intro. Cool drum breakdowns near 1:31-> as well. Very nice writing.
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enroe
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1992 posts since 19 Mar, 2008 from germany

Post Sat Nov 12, 2022 8:44 am

Genetic_Junk wrote: Fri Nov 11, 2022 1:55 pm
enroe wrote: Fri Nov 11, 2022 12:50 pm I once listened to "rev 1 Mix": I think the idea is very nice. Overall,
the mix is too queasy for me. It lacks a certain clarity that one could
actually achieve with these string instruments. Mmmhh ... :?
Thanks for listening and commenting. :) Do you think the lack of clarity is more due to the composition or the mixing?
The composition is great, but the mixing could be a bit clearer. :tu:
free mp3s + info: andy-enroe.de songs + weird stuff: enroe.de

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tomtom1
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838 posts since 21 May, 2020 from germany

Post Sun Nov 13, 2022 4:34 am

I really like the harmonies - the mix sounds a bit dense sometimes - but doesn't bother me that much. Was more focused on melodies and harmonies (which are really addicting) :tu:
it is better to have a track with some mistakes than a track without any soul
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seismic1
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10977 posts since 13 Mar, 2009 from UK

Post Sun Nov 13, 2022 4:12 pm

Genetic_Junk wrote: Thu Nov 10, 2022 4:10 pm Thanks for listening and commenting. :) Agreed on the lead volume. I'm going to make some adjustments.
The lead is more distinct (louder) in the rev01 mix :tu:

Genetic_Junk
KVRAF
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2725 posts since 22 Dec, 2004

Post Wed Nov 16, 2022 7:09 pm

tomtom1 wrote: Sun Nov 13, 2022 4:34 am I really like the harmonies - the mix sounds a bit dense sometimes - but doesn't bother me that much. Was more focused on melodies and harmonies (which are really addicting) :tu:
Thanks for the feedback. Glad you enjoyed. :)

Genetic_Junk
KVRAF
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2725 posts since 22 Dec, 2004

Post Wed Nov 16, 2022 7:10 pm

seismic1 wrote: Sun Nov 13, 2022 4:12 pm
Genetic_Junk wrote: Thu Nov 10, 2022 4:10 pm Thanks for listening and commenting. :) Agreed on the lead volume. I'm going to make some adjustments.
The lead is more distinct (louder) in the rev01 mix :tu:
Thanks for listening again. Glad it improved. Just a matter of moving the faders a bit on a few of the elements.

aaron aardvark
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2377 posts since 22 Jan, 2011 from near Los Angeles

Post Thu Nov 17, 2022 9:30 pm

Genetic_Junk,
Thank you for the review! Now your top mix. I also own Arturia Clavinet V (I haven't used it a whole lot; I think I'm better at 80's sounding music than 70's) also. Not that clavinet is exclusively 70's sounding. For me, your song has a bit of a prog vibe (a compliment). I think it all sounds quite good!
You can hear my original music at this link: https://www.soundclick.com/artist/defau ... dID=224436

Genetic_Junk
KVRAF
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2725 posts since 22 Dec, 2004

Post Mon Nov 21, 2022 4:56 pm

aaron aardvark wrote: Thu Nov 17, 2022 9:30 pm Genetic_Junk,
Thank you for the review! Now your top mix. I also own Arturia Clavinet V (I haven't used it a whole lot; I think I'm better at 80's sounding music than 70's) also. Not that clavinet is exclusively 70's sounding. For me, your song has a bit of a prog vibe (a compliment). I think it all sounds quite good!
Thank you for commenting aaron. :)

Mike777
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458 posts since 8 Oct, 2005

Post Mon Nov 21, 2022 6:25 pm

This put a smile on my face. That clavinet sounds great. I know it's playing lead but is it also playing chords? The guitar playing and amp is amazing basically.

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