Enjoy
https://soundcloud.com/besbuenduf/a-poison-tree
A Poison Tree (by William Blake & Besbuenduf)
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 39 posts since 15 Aug, 2022 from Europe
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- KVRian
- 1359 posts since 3 Dec, 2002
Overall, I liked the song. On the intro, I thought I was listening through a fan with one blade dragging, so was glad when it dropped out. I had a hard time with the vocals, they sounded nice but were hard to understand. Might be nice if you could actually sing along with the vox track, to improve intelligibility. I think it's a good song, it has a unique vibe.
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- KVRAF
- 2356 posts since 10 Jul, 2008 from Orbit NE US
Similar here with the voice track. I'm a big fan of William Blake (cool that you got him to sit in on your track), but i couldn't understand the voice. Usually i wouldn't mind. The music is really cool. I'd like to hear it again with the voice less treated and maybe mixed back a bit. Definitely good stuff.
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old stuff http://ww.dancingbearaudioresearch.com/
if this post is edited -it was for punctuation, grammar, or to make it coherent (or make me seem coherent).
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 39 posts since 15 Aug, 2022 from Europe
Thanks for the comments. I've prepared a remixed version, to be released soon.
