Jungletic (Electronic/Dance/Rave/ Jungle)
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 9 posts since 7 Apr, 2023
Hey,
Here is a new track I made. Any feedback is appreciated but I´m specially interested to know if it held interest/flow throughout the whole song? Let me know what you think! =)
https://soundcloud.com/alid-2170723/jun ... al_sharing
Here is a new track I made. Any feedback is appreciated but I´m specially interested to know if it held interest/flow throughout the whole song? Let me know what you think! =)
https://soundcloud.com/alid-2170723/jun ... al_sharing
- KVRAF
- 1994 posts since 19 Aug, 2008
My taste would be to add a little more reverb at the starting section (1st minute), just to give it a little depth dimension.
Did it hold my attention, the first minute yes, you made me want to know what was coming next, and there's enough variety throughout.
@2:30 nice breakdown which is very different. A little midi swing in there, is slightly too much for me as it can sound clumsy.
Whats missing for me, is a) a thematic lead melody, and b) some kind of vocal --- a human touch.
Did it hold my attention, the first minute yes, you made me want to know what was coming next, and there's enough variety throughout.
@2:30 nice breakdown which is very different. A little midi swing in there, is slightly too much for me as it can sound clumsy.
Whats missing for me, is a) a thematic lead melody, and b) some kind of vocal --- a human touch.
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 9 posts since 7 Apr, 2023
Hey,
Thank you for the feedback! =) I´ll admit I had some trouble with the sounddesign aspect on this one and might return to this later on again and try out your tips. Glad to hear the arrangment held for a while atleast!
Thank you for the feedback! =) I´ll admit I had some trouble with the sounddesign aspect on this one and might return to this later on again and try out your tips. Glad to hear the arrangment held for a while atleast!
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- KVRer
- 7 posts since 16 Aug, 2022
Reminds me of the Ibiza house days. The rise of the Swedish house scene. Nice track. I would’ve like the mix to be a bit drier so that the drums and bass gets a more groovier effect.
My music: https://www.youtube.com/@delmatic1784
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 9 posts since 7 Apr, 2023
Hello, thanks alot for your feedback!:) Yes, the swedes are actually my influence! =) I´m trying to find a groove/flow throughout the songs I´m working on at the moment and then build & find my own sound in the workings. So your feedback is very much appreciated!:)
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- KVRian
- 520 posts since 15 Aug, 2011 from Teesside
I commented similar, in another forum. It does have that pre SHM sound very early, just as all the electro style stuff died out.
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