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smd12 · Post by **smd12** » Mon Apr 30, 2018 11:13 pm

I changed some of the lyrics and re-recorded the vocals

here is the newest version

https://soundcloud.com/the_synthetic_aw ... -dungeon-1

wagtunes · Post by **wagtunes** » Mon Apr 30, 2018 11:25 pm

Interesting track. Heavy Metal/Prog Rock parody? The vocals almost had me cracking up, especially with those lyrics. My only minor criticism is that there wasn't enough variety. The intro of noise was about a minute long. Then there was that 3 note motif for about 2 minutes before the vocals start. And then the vocal section was rather one dimensional as well. Not much variance there. For a 7 and a half minute song, I was expecting some more variety. But otherwise, it was most interesting.

smd12 · Post by **smd12** » Mon Apr 30, 2018 11:36 pm

Wasn't trying to be a parody

I just wanted to make sure people understood the dungeon wasn't about D&D

Thanks for listening and the feedback

the.synthetic.awakening - Another Dungeon - Now with vocals (newly updated)