The Wagtunes Corner (Featuring My Best Yet)
- KVRAF
- 3374 posts since 28 Aug, 2012 from Melbourne, Australia
Allergies are my worst enemy too, usually in the spring. For the last few years a nasal spray has worked wonders for me! Hope yours clears up soon.
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Music with progressive intent.
Music with progressive intent.
- KVRAF
- 2110 posts since 19 Aug, 2008
Like it.
Started off with a really nice chord progression; was hooked at the beginning.
Also really thought the repeating of "press release" three times was interesting and effective.
@2:54 good chord progression and solo.
I hope the song is not a reflection of you and the wife having a tense time?
There have been a few moments of marital tension in my house in the past few weeks but we're surviving!
Also really thought the repeating of "press release" three times was interesting and effective.
@2:54 good chord progression and solo.
I hope the song is not a reflection of you and the wife having a tense time?
There have been a few moments of marital tension in my house in the past few weeks but we're surviving!
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 23004 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Thanks for the listen and feedback. No, nothing to do with anything at home. In fact, when I write a song, it's just a song and rarely, if ever, has anything to do with me. I am almost completely separated from my music, which may be a good or bad thing depending how you look at it.Bansaw wrote: Fri Apr 17, 2020 2:23 pm Like it.Started off with a really nice chord progression; was hooked at the beginning.
Also really thought the repeating of "press release" three times was interesting and effective.
@2:54 good chord progression and solo.
I hope the song is not a reflection of you and the wife having a tense time?
There have been a few moments of marital tension in my house in the past few weeks but we're surviving!
- KVRAF
- 2990 posts since 31 Jan, 2020
Try "the father who must be killed" from Ringleader Of The Tormentors.wagtunes wrote: Tue Apr 07, 2020 6:12 pm
I'm listening to "Everyday Is Like Sunday" by Morrissey now and I really don't hear it. Hell, I wish I could sing as well as he does.
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aaron aardvark aaron aardvark https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=248508
- KVRAF
- 3069 posts since 22 Jan, 2011 from near Los Angeles
wagtunes,
Thank you for the review! Now reviewing 'Just Like Every Monday': I like the intro guitar riff and lead guitars best: nice! I think your vocals are pretty good overall on this song, despite what you say. I like most all of the melodies. Audio quality is good. When there is a brief break, I wondered if it suddenly stopped, but glad it continued (I liked the brief break). What's the vocal-like organ synth sound: sounds interesting? My allergies were at the worst when I was around 20 years old; not nearly as bad as they used to be, but still get sniffly at times. Carry on!
Thank you for the review! Now reviewing 'Just Like Every Monday': I like the intro guitar riff and lead guitars best: nice! I think your vocals are pretty good overall on this song, despite what you say. I like most all of the melodies. Audio quality is good. When there is a brief break, I wondered if it suddenly stopped, but glad it continued (I liked the brief break). What's the vocal-like organ synth sound: sounds interesting? My allergies were at the worst when I was around 20 years old; not nearly as bad as they used to be, but still get sniffly at times. Carry on!
You can hear my original music at this link: https://www.soundclick.com/artist/defau ... dID=224436
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 23004 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Aaron, thanks for the listen. The organ like synth is a Zebra 2 patch that I made specifically for this song with lots of high pass filtering on it.aaron aardvark wrote: Sat Apr 18, 2020 2:40 am wagtunes,
Thank you for the review! Now reviewing 'Just Like Every Monday': I like the intro guitar riff and lead guitars best: nice! I think your vocals are pretty good overall on this song, despite what you say. I like most all of the melodies. Audio quality is good. When there is a brief break, I wondered if it suddenly stopped, but glad it continued (I liked the brief break). What's the vocal-like organ synth sound: sounds interesting? My allergies were at the worst when I was around 20 years old; not nearly as bad as they used to be, but still get sniffly at times. Carry on!![]()
Thanks for the kind words on the vocals. I don't think I'm ever going to like my voice, though on some songs it sounds better than on others.
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aaron aardvark aaron aardvark https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=248508
- KVRAF
- 3069 posts since 22 Jan, 2011 from near Los Angeles
I've been using Zebra (and I have ZebraHZ) for several years; I wouldn't have guessed that's what it was. Though I've found Zebra to be very versatile for a non-sample based synth.
You can hear my original music at this link: https://www.soundclick.com/artist/defau ... dID=224436
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- KVRian
- 518 posts since 23 Apr, 2017 from Eastern US
That second track’s intro is awfully similar to La Bamba. Nothing wrong with that though.
Many paid and free VSTs as well as Kontakt libraries. As well as HW synths/drum machine and acoustic instruments.
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 23004 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Interesting. Never give that song a second thought. Was never one of my favorites. Of course it's a pretty common chord progression so there is that.Music Bird wrote: Sat Apr 18, 2020 8:54 pm That second track’s intro is awfully similar to La Bamba. Nothing wrong with that though.
- addled muppet weed
- 111299 posts since 26 Jan, 2003 from through the looking glass
this year you get the added bonus of people thinking youve got corona if you sneezeAllomerus wrote: Fri Apr 17, 2020 11:16 am Allergies are my worst enemy too, usually in the spring. For the last few years a nasal spray has worked wonders for me! Hope yours clears up soon.
- addled muppet weed
- 111299 posts since 26 Jan, 2003 from through the looking glass
jlem - wow, thats poppy!
now this is a song! i can hear this being recorded by a band too, very catchy.
the morrisey comparison, wasnt the whole song, but there ws sone part early on, there was a bit of "last of the famous international playboys" going on, which is apt, given thats your tune!
seriously, nice work!
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 23004 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Thanks Vurt. Hope you're doing well stuck in the dungeon somewhere. How come not hearing any new stuff from you?vurt wrote: Sat Apr 18, 2020 9:47 pm![]()
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jlem - wow, thats poppy!
now this is a song! i can hear this being recorded by a band too, very catchy.
the morrisey comparison, wasnt the whole song, but there ws sone part early on, there was a bit of "last of the famous international playboys" going on, which is apt, given thats your tune!
seriously, nice work!![]()
What's up with that?
- addled muppet weed
- 111299 posts since 26 Jan, 2003 from through the looking glass
look againwagtunes wrote: Sat Apr 18, 2020 9:48 pmThanks Vurt. Hope you're doing well stuck in the dungeon somewhere. How come not hearing any new stuff from you?vurt wrote: Sat Apr 18, 2020 9:47 pm![]()
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jlem - wow, thats poppy!
now this is a song! i can hear this being recorded by a band too, very catchy.
the morrisey comparison, wasnt the whole song, but there ws sone part early on, there was a bit of "last of the famous international playboys" going on, which is apt, given thats your tune!
seriously, nice work!![]()
What's up with that?
but thanks, yeah not too bad, same as everyone, theres things im missing, but we have to get on with it.
been getting plenty of photos of my baby grandaughter and videos, few facetime calls, so thats helped a great deal
hope you and yours are all keeping safe
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 23004 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Ah okay, you just posted it a half hour ago. This is the first I'm getting back to the PC in some time.vurt wrote: Sat Apr 18, 2020 9:53 pmlook againwagtunes wrote: Sat Apr 18, 2020 9:48 pmThanks Vurt. Hope you're doing well stuck in the dungeon somewhere. How come not hearing any new stuff from you?vurt wrote: Sat Apr 18, 2020 9:47 pm![]()
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jlem - wow, thats poppy!
now this is a song! i can hear this being recorded by a band too, very catchy.
the morrisey comparison, wasnt the whole song, but there ws sone part early on, there was a bit of "last of the famous international playboys" going on, which is apt, given thats your tune!
seriously, nice work!![]()
What's up with that?
but thanks, yeah not too bad, same as everyone, theres things im missing, but we have to get on with it.
been getting plenty of photos of my baby grandaughter and videos, few facetime calls, so thats helped a great deal
hope you and yours are all keeping safe![]()
I'll go check it out.
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 23004 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
3rd track from my upcoming CD "RPM II"
Lessons
What have you got to say for yourself
You screwed up again
You walked out on what we had
You do this now and then
How many times do
You think I'll take you
Back into my arms girl
Have you learned your lessons
ABCD All the way home
Have you learned your lessons
It's not like this is so unknown
Can you get your degree
Masters or PhD
Have you learned your lessons
For loving me
Repeating mistakes is just your style
You're the head of the class
You turned it into an art
You're a pain in the ass
How many times do
You think I'll take you
Back into my arms girl
Repeat Chorus
This is your last chance
To do this last dance
No way can this go on
Instrumental Break
How many times do
You think I'll take you
Back into my arms girls
Repeat Chorus
Outro
https://soundcloud.com/steven-wagenheim/lessons
Lessons
What have you got to say for yourself
You screwed up again
You walked out on what we had
You do this now and then
How many times do
You think I'll take you
Back into my arms girl
Have you learned your lessons
ABCD All the way home
Have you learned your lessons
It's not like this is so unknown
Can you get your degree
Masters or PhD
Have you learned your lessons
For loving me
Repeating mistakes is just your style
You're the head of the class
You turned it into an art
You're a pain in the ass
How many times do
You think I'll take you
Back into my arms girl
Repeat Chorus
This is your last chance
To do this last dance
No way can this go on
Instrumental Break
How many times do
You think I'll take you
Back into my arms girls
Repeat Chorus
Outro
https://soundcloud.com/steven-wagenheim/lessons